MENGIKUTI jejak Aan M Mansyur saya mendaftar dan menampilkan sajak ini di situs POETRYSOUP. Thanks to Rilla, yang sudah menerjemahkan sajak itu.
Bella Cardenas, anggota situs yang sama berkomentar: This is a very different perspective. I've never thought of Adam and Eve this way. It's beautiful, it shows human emotion, and the last line hits hard. I just want you to know i rated you a 7, it's so goregously composed and has wonderful insight. Wonderful write, Hansan. Sincerely, Bella.
